You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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These graphs, recorded overseas and local
students
respectively, show the change of
the Change preposition
in
number
of students
in Australian
universities
from 2001 to 2010.
About oversears
Correct your spelling
overseas
overseers
students
, in 2001, there are nearly 20000 overseas students
totally in Australian
universities
, where nearly 10000 of them were commencing students
. The total and commencing number
of students
were
increasing year by year Change the verb form
was
in
a Change preposition
at
similiar
speed. In 2009, the Correct your spelling
similar
amount
of total Change the quantifier
number
students
in Australian
universities
was
close to 80000 and the Change the verb form
were
commencing
Correct quantifier usage
number of commencing
students
was
nearly 40000. In 2010, the speeds of the increasing Change the verb form
were
number
both slow down. The number
of total students
just
plus 1000-2000 and the Add a missing verb
was just
number
of commencing students
was less than 1000.
On the other hand
, about the number
local
Change preposition
of local
students
. In 2001, there are nearly 400000 students
in Australian
universities
and 200000 of them was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
the
commencing Correct article usage
apply
students
. The number
of commerncing
Correct your spelling
commencing
students
varied in
200000 Change preposition
to
level
in the Fix the agreement mistake
levels
next
ten year
. Meanwhile, the Fix the agreement mistake
years
number
of total studetns
Correct your spelling
students
was increase
to 600000 in 2007Change the verb form
was increased
was increasing
,
and seemed Remove the comma
apply
kept
Change the verb form
to keep
in
the same level Change preposition
at
in
Change preposition
apply
the
after three years.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, the total number
of university students
in Australia increased from 2001 to 2010. The total number
of local students
was more than the overseas
Correct quantifier usage
number of overseas
students
in this
period.Submitted by huangjiancong863 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, number, australian, universities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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