Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.
In recent times, electronic transactions are popular and
its
is replacing the traditional banking system and use of paper Change the pronoun
it
money
which is supplanted by credit card
and debit Fix the agreement mistake
cards
card
. There are many benefits of Fix the agreement mistake
cards
this
plastic money
such
as it is easy to carry and person
can do transactions easily even in Correct article usage
a person
foreign
country. Add an article
a foreign
However
, it cannot able to use in small retail outlets and it creates massive problems when it is stolen or someone knows about your card
details. In this
essay I will discuss both the positive and negative consequences of plastic money
and based on I will derive a conclusion.
On the positive side, bank cards are easy to carry and more convenient to access. Person
does not need to carry Add an article
A person
The person
bunch
of hard cash. Add an article
a bunch
For example
, if individual
wants to buy Add an article
an individual
the individual
four wheeler
vehicle , so he cannot carry paper Add a hyphen
four-wheeler
money
with him. Also
, there are many handsome discounts as well as offer available for purchase thins by cards. Moreover
it is accessible in every corner of the world. Add a comma
,Moreover
For instance
, nowadays , Correct your spelling
it
is
has become easy to shop with VISA or MASTER Correct your spelling
it
CARD
, virtually from anywhere in this
global village. Also
people do not need to standing in a long queue to pay their utility bills or convert their native currency to any other Add a comma
,Also
nation
currency.
On the negative side, as every garden has Replace the word
national
weed
, plastic transactions have Fix the agreement mistake
weeds
also
drawbacks. First
and foremost , this
type of payments system are
not accepted by small retailers or in rural areas people are not aware Change the verb form
is
about
it. Change the preposition
of
Also
Add a comma
,Also
this
cards machines need a
electric city to access it. It is not available 24*7 power supply in villages. To illustrate Change the article
an
this
scenario , about 6 months ago, I visited a village in Rajasthan state where I purchase cold drinks and I gave my debit card
for payment but shopkeeper
denied it because he does not have swiping machine. Correct article usage
the shopkeeper
In addition
, it creates huge
issue if Add an article
a huge
anonymous
is know about Correct article usage
an anonymous
card
details such
as card
number or password. For illustrate, in present
time, many news telecasted on television that its sensitive data is hacked and Correct article usage
the present
due to
the owner would suffer a great financial loss.
To conclude, Change preposition
apply
although
having advantages such
as it is a best and suitable payment method. However
the negative side cannot be ignored.Add a comma
,However
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
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- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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- The disadvantage of this...
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- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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