Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV, video games and other entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect the children? How do you think this problem can be tackled?

Some

parents

are not happy

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children

who are spending long hours

for

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video games,TV and other media which

consists

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of violence.

This

is a serious issue

which

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parents

and

teachers

tackle together to prevent bad consequences for

children

's bright and beautiful future.

Firstly

,we need to find out what types of video games and TV entertainment made

children

addicted to these inappropriate series.

For example

,if

children

who are under five years always crave

for

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the

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video games about

serial

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killer

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killers

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,

parents

should limit the spending period .Time out system is

a

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really effective for

children

to understand the reason

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restrictions and good for their insight into reality.

Secondly

,

children

need to enjoy other entertainment

such

as painting,reading and gardening for their leisure.The more activities they can choose,the better for their physical and mental illness.Sports and gymnastics

is

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the best to improve their level of body and mind fitness.School lessons and homework are

also

necessary to lead them in a disciplined discussion which is

two way

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communication between

teachers

and pupils.

Thirdly

,peer pressure is one key factor

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dominate

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their mind that most of their friends play

this

violent game and he cannot resist watching

this

programme.In

this

case,

parents

and

teachers

often need to communicate

such

as regular school assessment of childrens' fitness in class. In conclusion,

children

will be the precious gems for

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and community so if they become more violent , less wise and mindful,

this

is a huge loss for all of us.If

parents

and

teachers

really love their

children

,punishment with reward method is

a

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good interaction in order to reduce the worse conditions which

children

can absorb in

this

violence.