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Murphy, who has undergone Amputation of the Left Big Toe secondary to uncontrolled Diabetes Mellitus into your care . He requires continuous care and management .
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Muurphy came to visit the Gp on 19 July ,20019 with self-treated infected left big toe followed by an injury while gardening before one week. He refused to
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. His blood sugar was high and was referred to a diabetologist. After 10 days he was admitted to the hospital due to delayed wound healing . The wound becomes swollen reddened itchy and presence of pus but had no pain.
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, the amputation was performed on 04 august 2019. The surgery was successful and treated conservatively with antibiotics, analgesics and daily dressing.
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Murphy seems to be depressed isolated and has no interest in daily activities.He needs assistance in walking and bathing.
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Murphy is a retired postal employee, who is a widower living alone . He has a son who lives abroad. He is introverted had no relation with neighbours.He has a sedentary lifestyle and has habits of smoking and drinking.He is a known case of diabetes and hypertension . He has non-compliance about diet and medication. It would be greatly appreciated if you could provide
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care for McMurphy. He requires daily dressing and education on self-administration
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