You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear Neeta, I am so excited to share my experience of a musical

concert

, I attended yesterday in the Miranda House; I must say that it was not only the best but

also

the memorable moment of my life. You are well aware

that

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how much I am a great admirer of Arijit Singh, always

have

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dreamt

to go

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of going

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to his

concert

and

was

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waiting for

this

opportunity for so long which felt like

for

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an aeon.

Consequently

, when I was going for my lectures,

there

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my eyes pointed to the grand poster that mentioned his

concert

and I was ebullient and

determine

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to go there. Seriously, it was the best moment of my life but

also

was struggling

for entering

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the campus, I

have

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to first wait in cue for about 4-5 hours,

then

showed

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my pass and I accessed the college.

However

, when I reached near to the stage, already amass of students and fans were standing at first felt that I

will

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not

able

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to watch my favourite singer in front, so

for

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that

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, I

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to push and squeeze to reach near to

a

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stage, where it was a gruelling task, but able to reached to the barricades and have to hold it until

concert

ends, so that no one draw-back.

Although

there was a lot of struggle,

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to be fruitful. As I was able to see my admirer in front of my eyes, and

waiting

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for the concession of his performance, once begin, it was breathtaking and

stimulate

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the

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excitement whenever he sang, his performance was worthy,

I

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acknowledge that his voice is so melodious and heartwarming and sing in the depth of the emotions that sometimes tear fallen from the public,

moreover

, I even noticed that his voice in real life is so wonderful and filled with rhythmic and melody that you hardly felt when hearing his recording. Every public was even taking part,

scream

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and

cheer

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with ecstasy,

furthermore

, started singing along

him

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, I was enjoying

so

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much that I

was wishing

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that it never

ends

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ended

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, but once he said that

this

is

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the

last

song he

is

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going to sing, everyone made a sound of disagreement, so college department arrived to persuade them and all were reluctantly acquiesce. I must say once over, I wish to have a selfie, but

due to

security reasons, it could not

possible

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.

Nevertheless

, I enjoyed it enormously, I

wish

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you

could

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also

enjoy the same,

and

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I am aware that you are the biggest fan of Mohit Chauhan, and it is going to attend after a week

in

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Venkateshwar College, I will reach there tomorrow and waiting for you, there we will meet union leader, he is a friend of mine as he will definitely provide me with the pass, so do not miss

this

opportunity and you

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make your dream come true to see your favourite singer. Henceforth, I will wait for your response. Take care Yours faithfully, Nandika