Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor
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Nowadays, some country's government has approved the tobacco less productive than a nonsmoker. productivity and,
law
that smokers shouldn
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should
smoke
in the
public places namely work, restaurant, and school. Correct article usage
apply
However
, the issue is not entirely straight
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countries
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this
. In the following paragraphs, I shall consider both sides of this
very topical debate. On the one hand, some countries
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are concern
concern
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everyone has the right to do anything that an individual prefers to do, and one of them is to smoke
in public areas. This
seems that these countries
' citizens think that their right to smoke
is more important than others' right to be healthy. Another argument is who opposite law
that the benefit coming from the sales of cigarettes makes up most of the state budget, so if they forbade people to smoke
, it would destroy their economy. For instance
: Cuba has been globally famous for cigarettes and exports its product to many other countries
; this
results in their surges economy. By contrast
, countries
which adhere in
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has reduced exposure to secondhand smoke
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resulting
the
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such
as heart disease and lung cancer. There is some evidence that the number of heart attacks has been reduced in Singapore and Canada by adopting smoke
-free workplace laws. In addition
, employees who are considerably addicted to cigarettes negatively affect job productivity long-term, losing labor
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labour
due to
smoke
breaks and absenteeism. For example
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Finally
, it appears that the restriction also
decreases costs, that if countries
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have comprehensive
smoke
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and maintenance
this
law
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion