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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, social networking become rapidly changing the lives of
people
 around the world and creating
high
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 demand for all different levels of
people
 in society. Some
people
clime
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claim
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 that it has several drawbacks if
user
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users
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 use it in undue ways and share personal data. I strongly agree that the cons outweigh the pros. The following paragraphs discuss both advantages and disadvantages and reach a reasonable conclusion.
To begin
 with, there are many benefits
for
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 using social media. It
is become
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becomes
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 more useful and beneficial in terms of gaining information and enable
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the user
a user
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user
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users
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 to communicate well with each other among
people
. To illustrate more, through those applications’ official institutions in developed
counites
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 can use
it
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 as magnificent tools to announce the latest news or regulations via those channels.
Furthermore
, it is likely supported the citizen to interact and compline about through applications
such
 as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and Snapchat.
On the other hand
, social networking has its drawbacks, to clarify, many influencers share the personal
life
 with followers which lead to increase their income and encourage others to follow their trend and the way of lifestyle.
For example
,
people
 who have high revenues love to spend
couple
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 of days in a luxury hotel, fancy car and wearing expensive
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clothes
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cloths
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.
Moreover
, sharing details
life
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of life
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 will allow thieves to do many crimes
such
 as smuggling and
kidnaping
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kidnapping
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. As result, the more sharing personal
life
 the more you get murder In conclusion, after analyzing both
side
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 of
this
 topic it is not hard to see that the advantages exceed the disadvantages. Social media enhanced consumers to connect more to have great access to information and more
communicate
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 with others.
People
 should careful not to share their personal
life
 publicly.
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