Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of a high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhoods or teaching sports for young children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often considered that helping other people in any way should be a part
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high school education. I agree with
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statement that free
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which we do should be a part of our schooling which helps to change our mindset in
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. To
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embark
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on, Education helps to gain knowledge in various fields.
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, schooling not only
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us improve in
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but
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helps to learn different activities. One of the activities which we need to discuss is free
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which
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a crucial role in
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. So, some experts believe that helping
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should include as one of the
programme
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. At
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, schools should teach them to help friends like borrowing things whenever they require
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slowly they need to start an event of
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special
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.
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, In my childhood, My school has conducted a programme of helping elder people
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spending time with them in
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homes as they miss their families.
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makes them happy along with
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we learnt that how they feel when we spend time with them.
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, including
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events makes us learn more.
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, they should
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include the events to save trees and environment which makes us
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learn regarding the surroundings. As
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make
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us learn the importance of environment when we grow up.
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Furthermore
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schools should follow some rules and teach the pupils regarding
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type of
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services
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. If these
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of programmes are not included
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we can't learn how to help
others
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in the
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and we may not able to explain the importance of serving
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in anyways to our
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generations.
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, when we help
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,
definetly
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definitely
our children will learn from us. Altogether, these
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of events will help them
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as they divert from their daily schedule. In conclusion, serving
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freely not only makes us
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better human beings but it helps
others
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to learn from us.
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behaviour should be developed from our young age itself as we will easily mould at that age. I completely agree that
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programmes should be included in our high school.
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