Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of a high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhoods or teaching sports for young children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often considered that helping other people in any way should be a part
in
high school education. I agree with Change preposition
of
this
statement that free services
which we do should be a part of our schooling which helps to change our mindset in future
.
To embarke
on, Education helps to gain knowledge in various fields. Correct your spelling
embark
embarked
However
, schooling not only make
us improve in Change the verb form
makes
subject
but Add an article
the subject
a subject
also
helps to learn different activities. One of the activities which we need to discuss is free services
which plays
a crucial role in Change the verb form
play
future
. So, some experts believe that helping others
should include as one of the programme
. At Change to a plural noun
programmes
first
, schools should teach them to help friends like borrowing things whenever they require then
slowly they need to start an event of this
special services
. For instance
, In my childhood, My school has conducted a programme of helping elder people like
spending time with them in Change preposition
by
oldage
homes as they miss their families. Correct your spelling
old age
old-age
This
makes them happy along with this
we learnt that how they feel when we spend time with them. Thus
, including this
events makes us learn more.
Correct determiner usage
these
Secondly
, they should also
include the events to save trees and environment which makes us to
learn regarding the surroundings. As Change the verb form
apply
this
make
us learn the importance of environment when we grow up. Change the verb form
makes
Furthermore
schools should follow some rules and teach the pupils regarding Add a comma
,Furthermore
this
type of services
. If these Fix the agreement mistake
service
type
of programmes are not included Fix the agreement mistake
types
then
we can't learn how to help others
in the future
and we may not able to explain the importance of serving others
in anyways to our future
generations. However
, when we help others
, definetly
our children will learn from us. Altogether, these Correct your spelling
definitely
type
of events will help them Fix the agreement mistake
types
stress free
as they divert from their daily schedule.
In conclusion, serving Add a hyphen
stress-free
others
freely not only makes us a
better human beings but it helps Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
others
to learn from us. This
behaviour should be developed from our young age itself as we will easily mould at that age. I completely agree that this
programmes should be included in our high school.Correct determiner usage
these
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