Some countries today have passed law against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

Nowadays, smoking in public places has been prohibited in some

countries

,

while

others

thought it was unnecessary. In

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essay, I will discuss

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both sides of

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phenomenon, and give

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view. On the one hand, critics of tobacco restriction in public places promote the idea that smoking

is depends

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on personal choice. Citizens of those

countries

think that they should have

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freedom to smoke

in

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anywhere they want.

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, some

countries

believe that

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in public

area

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can lead to economic improvement. Evidence from many

statistic

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shows that

countries

,

allow

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people to smoke in public areas sell more than other

countries

.

On the other hand

, supporters of anti-tobacco

law

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claim that smoking in public places may infringe on the right of

others

to live a healthy life.

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of

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health organization

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shows that cigarettes are not only harmful to smokers but

also

harmful to

others

.

This

is to say that if someone is smoking in offices and restaurants, people who sit around could be in

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.

Moreover

, for the

countries

that don’t produce cigarettes,

cost

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of it could be relatively higher than self-producing

countries

.

This

is to say that

countries

import

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tobacco should pay import taxes,

therefore

it cannot be

financial

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friendly.

Finally

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smoking is one of the

mean

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reasons causes air pollution.

Although

there are many reasons to pollute the air,

but

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pollution from tobacco can not be ignored.

Overall

, It seems that smoking in public may disturb

others

and have

serious

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a serious

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impact on air pollution.

Therefore

anti-cigarettes law will be preferable.