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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many organizations asked
the
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employees to
dress
 smartly.
However
, the importance of
dress
 codes in the workplace is debatable.
This
 essay will discuss why the
quality
 of
work
 outweighs the
appearance
.
First
, the organizations require the staff to
dress
 smartly
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in order
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inorder
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in order
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 to
crete
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create
 a serious and
profession
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professional
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to
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 the
customers
.
For example
, since lawyers are dealing with serious issues,
customers
 always need more
confident
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to
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in
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 the lawyers they hired.
Therefore
 lawyers used to wear
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suits in order to give a professional and confident image to the clients. Not just the professional occupations,
dress
 smart is
also
 important to the essential services. Another example is customer service providers, they cannot
dress
too
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fashion
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 which might leads the
customers
think
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 they are not working seriously and not willing to trust them. Smart dressing is one of the criteria that people define whether the person is professional or not.
However
, is everyone who
dress
 smart
means
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 they are professional? I
sincerly
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sincerely
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that. There are more criteria to evaluate the employee where
quality
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the quality
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 of
work
 seems to be the
first
 priority.
Appearance
 doesn't provide the qualification of a person. Even the doctors
dress
 casual, their experience and knowledge still
exsist
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exist
exists
.
In contrast
,
eventhough
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even though
 with the smart dressing, if they are not trained up to
work
 perfectly, they are still not the medical experts.
Also
, employers would only promote a staff because of their
work
instead
 of their
appearance
 as the
quality
 of
work
 affects the
furture
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future
 of the
organizaton
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organization
 rather than the outlook of the staff.
Hence
, the
quality
 of
work
 should be the only criteria the organization should look into. In my opinion, it is true that
smart
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appearance
 gains the customer's
turst
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trust
,
however
, without
the
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good
quality
 output,
customers
 are not satisfied with just
smart
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appearance
. It's obvious
thw
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the
that
quality
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 of
work
 outweighs the outlook of the employees.
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