Global environment issues are the responsibilities of rich nations not of the poor nation. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Global environmental

issues

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Governments all over the world. Rich

nations

are fully responsible

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these

issues

is debatable.

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essay will

dicuss

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discuss

why both wealthy and poor

countries

should

responsible

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to

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that. Rich

nations

should take

in

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charge of

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global environmental

issues

. Those areas are normally producing

large

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amount

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of pollutions in order to maintain economic activities. Human activities in wealthy areas,

such

as running factories,

traffics

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and

electricity generating

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, are producing

huge

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amount

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of pollutants when

compare

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to the undeveloped

countries

.

Therefore

, it is reasonable to ask the problem makers, the developed

countries

, to take

responsibilities

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global environmental

issues

.

Besides

, in order to handle the

environment

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environmental

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problems

, regulations and fundings are essential, which leads back to the wealthy governments to

response

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to

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.

Although

some of the regulations can stop the

prodution

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production

of excessive pollutions due to

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human activities, rewarding systems, which require money, will be more effective.

Public

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tends to accept rewarding systems than

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regulation as laws does not benefit them.

On the other hand

, solving the

exsiting

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existing

exciting

environmental

issues

always costs

billions

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dollars,

such

as the

the

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cost of collecting ocean garbage is over billions.

Also

, scientific

reasearches

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researchers

and

inovations

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innovations

for these

problems

require

a

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considerable funding in order to get to best result.

Hence

, solving

problems

could not be accomplished without money, which undeveloped

countries

don't have.

However

, the

third

world

coutries

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countries

should

also

bear a part of the responsibilities on global environmental

issues

,

such

as education. Those government should educate their people

how

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to conserve energy and resources.

Also

, the way they use in agriculture should

also

be improved, as over-

havesting

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harvesting

and

mispracticing

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practising

harvest

method

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would lead to different environmental

problems

, like deforestation. Undeveloped

nations

can

also

contribute

on

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environmental

issues

. In conclusion, both rich and poor

nations

should

responsible

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to

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the global environmental

issues

where the wealthies' should contribute more

efford

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effort

than the

poors

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poor

. We are all sharing the same Earth,

hence

, why don't

everone

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everyone

takes

responsibilities

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responsibility

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of

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it?