Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the current trend of globalization and new opportunities ,
world
is evolving day by day Add an article
the world
in
a very fast pace. Some masses believe it is better to accept Change preposition
at
unfavourable
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the unfavourable
situation
and go on without changing the conditions whereas opponents believe to work hard and try new Fix the agreement mistake
situations
things
to improve current
situation. I believe that hard work can change anything and Add an article
the current
person
should strive for better. On the one hand, trying new Correct article usage
a person
things
can be cumbersome for some people . Firstly
, one
who doesn't have any experience in any field Change preposition
for one
for
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apply
those
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it
can be difficult to try out new Correct pronoun usage
apply
things
because chances of failure are high.Secondly
, it can be difficult to change hometown to another place for jobs as it may increase expenditure but income remaining same. On the other hand
, exploring new things
can enhance experience
of a Add an article
the experience
person
which can be beneficial in achieving better paying
jobs in future . If a Add a hyphen
better-paying
person
does a hardwork
and tries to learn new Correct your spelling
hard work
hardware
things
along with job
it can be very helpful in future. Correct pronoun usage
their job
his job
her job
For instance
, by doing simple it
courses along with Correct pronoun usage
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job
can enhance the skills of a Correct article usage
a job
person
and they can certainly look for another job along with it to improve income. In conclusion , I would say striving for better conditions should be duty
of every individual rather than comprising on Add an article
the duty
current
situationAdd an article
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite