Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Over the recent years, a number of
people
have been living with
friends
or alone rather than with their
families
and arguments have persisted as to whether it has a bad impact on societies.
Although
there are strong arguments on both sides, I strongly believe that living with
families
is better. Living with
families
can help
people
to improve their personalities.
In other words
, it helps you to develop social norms. Since their relatives are older, children not only can learn valuable lessons from them but can
also
enhance characteristics
such
as respect, obey,... Another reason is that living with family is much safer than living out. Because they experienced more, parents know how to deal with dangerous or emergency situations.
For example
, if children are sick, their parents can handle it well,
in contrast
to their
friends
or even having no one beside them at all. Living out,
for example
living with
friends
or alone, is not without benefits. It can be more comfortable, easier to focus on working,... But living out means having no one to manage, even if one is a child or a
grown up
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.
This
can easily make
people
dissipate, leading to a setback in their careers.
For instance
, when
people
live with
friends
, they will stay until midnight
everyday
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to play games or watch films,
thus
being tired the day after when they have to go to work. In summary,
although
living out can have its advantages, living with
families
is more recommended because of its safety and the way it makes
people
become better.
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  • Communal cohesion
  • Geographical dispersion
  • Interpersonal relationships
  • Socio-economic factors
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  • Psychological well-being
  • Technological facilitation
  • Independence
  • Traditional vs modern lifestyles
  • Intergenerational relationships
  • Virtual communities
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