Families who do not send their children to government financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that supports universal education. To what extent do you agree .

Nowadays , privileged families make their children learn at private
schools
instead
of
government
schools
but some opponents believe they need not
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pay for universal tax of
education
. I completely disagree with the above statement and think that paying
tax
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is
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of
an
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wealthy individual to make a contribution towards
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society.
To begin
with,
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chunk of the population belong to
middle
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class and they depend on the facilities provided by the
government
. Many hospitals and
schools
are run by funds collected by means of taxation on people. So it is mandatory for the citizens to pay tax timely in order to help masses of their country indirectly.
For example
, a labourer may not afford a private school for his children but if
government
schools
provide them with quality
education
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low rates , it can certainly help in making them literate enough.
Secondly
, our constitution has given
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to
education
to children from 2 to 12 years of age .
The free
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and compulsory
education
has been made mandatory to
masses
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which can help in improving
literacy
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the literacy
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rate of the country and eventually it will lead to
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economy . So it is
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of every individual of our country to take part in
this
movement. In conclusion, we reach
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overview that helping
government
institutions not only benefit so many unprivileged masses but boots economy too.
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