The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
The charts give more information about showing of men and women
employee
in 1975 and 1995 in some Fix the agreement mistake
employees
catagories
of the Republic of Freedonia.
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categories
Firstly
,to start with first
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the first
This
pointer is about 1975
index. We can see thatCorrect article usage
the 1975
,
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apply
maximum
showing was Add an article
the maximum
infroduced
with almost 850 employees in men in Correct your spelling
introduced
public
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the public
sector
(non-defence
).In contrast
,minimum
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the minimum
statiatic
was appreciated with almost 30 Correct your spelling
statistic
statistics
workers
in public
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the public
sector
(defence
) in
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a woman
the woman
woman
.Generally,Fix the agreement mistake
women
top
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the top
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a woman
woman
is equal Fix the agreement mistake
women
approximately
630.A small number of man Change preposition
to approximately
workers
is equal almost
210 in Change preposition
to almost
public
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the public
sector
(defend)
On the other hand
,second
chart is about 1995 showing.Most of all Change the article
the second
was
estimated almost 850 male Change the verb form
were
workers
in public
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the public
sector
(non
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non-defence
defence
),in addition
,at least showing was
approximately 101 woman Correct subject-verb agreement
were
workers
in public sector
defence
. The stafistic
of Manufacturing and communication level each other Correct your spelling
statistic
statistics
may be
300 male and female Correct your spelling
maybe
workers
respectively.
To sum up
,both 1975 and 1995 year high rate belonged to public
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the public
sector
(without defence
).On top of that at least number
was illustrated in Correct article usage
a number
public
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the public
sector
,however
the showing waa
better in 1995 than Correct your spelling
was
1975
.Change preposition
in 1975
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