In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Demand for new houses is increasing day by day in urban areas,
although
there is a shortage of land available for
this
purpose. The only solution to
this
problem is to build
homes
in
the
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rural area.
However
, some
people
opine that the countryside should not be used for building residential buildings, but I completely disagree with
this
argument.
First
and foremost, due to the growing population more and more
people
are migrating to big
cities
in search of better jobs,
life style
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and education.
This
results in space constraints in these metropolitan
cities
. So the only solution to get rid of
congestion
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in
cities
is to build
homes
in the rural area. Building
homes
away from
cities
will
also
reduce the problem of traffic jams in urban areas.
People
will not have to waste hours in traffic
jam
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daily.
Last
but not least, it will be helpful for improving the lifestyle of
people
living in the countryside as the price of
property
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will increase benefitting the local community. These residential buildings will open doors for new business setups, services
such
as restaurants, shopping malls and gymnasiums. A good example of
this
is the city of Chandigarh. The area in which Chandigarh was developed was completely rural with almost no job opportunities
,
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and educational institutions.
However
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the development of
this
completely new settlement opened doors for new job opportunities and it resulted in
holistic
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development of local residents. To conclude, in my
opinion
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building
homes
in the countryside is a win-win situation for all the stakeholders. It eases the space constraints and traffic congestion in
cities
. At the same time, it improves the standard of living in rural areas.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
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