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Nowadays parents are sending their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In developing
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 it has become a trend to send children abroad for educational purposes in search of better opportunities than in their own
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. I believe that
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 trend has to stop as
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 has led to a decrease in talent in developing nations. On one hand, there are certain advantages to
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 kind of migration as the developed
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 have better educational facilities than developing
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. The higher educational standards help the students to excel in their skills which in turn helps them to succeed in their lives. By completing studies in reputed universities, students gain a lot of experience which helps them to build their careers.
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, these
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 always have better working opportunities and living standards when compared to developing
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,
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 kind of migration has created a gap in the development of
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. Most of the talent is travelling abroad and these
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 are left with minimum resources for their upbringing. A nation's economic growth depends on how its citizens are progressing in terms of technological advancements, but in these
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countries
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 see a lack of individuals working for the progress of their
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. So the governments need to create better standards in education to retain the talent within the
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. To conclude, I believe that it is every citizen's responsibility to achieve progress within the
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. Even though people are going abroad for better educational purposes, they should come back to their homeland after their studies and use their talents to develop their own
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