Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small and local businesses are unable to compete.Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalisation and industrialisation brought

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immense change in

business

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businesses

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supermarkets

expansion. Some

people

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it's not totally disappearing of locals market but

supermarkets

are affecting somehow the local shops.

First

of all,

people

are having lack of time because of their tight schedule so they gave much preference to buy anything from

supermarkets

rather than any local shop.

Furthermore

supermarkets

lure their customers by giving a lot of

scheme

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like buy one ,get one or a lot more so public run behind desperately these kinds of schemes.

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supermarkets

are combined

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a lot of other services like cinema,food courts and playroom

consequently

this

is a great beneficial part of any business when

people

can not stop them to go and buy another beyond benefits. In local ,businesses

people

have a limited stock not having varieties as

supermarkets

are having so

that is

another reason when

supermarkets

are running great rather than local businesses. In conclusion, overall it can be observed that

supermarkets

are the

first

priority in

people

's choice but it doesn't mean that local communities are dying. It can say that they are

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but not existent.

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