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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small and local businesses are unable to compete.Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Globalisation and industrialisation brought
a
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immense change in
business
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businesses
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 like
supermarkets
 expansion. Some
people
 believe that it is the existence of local communities. According to my point of ,
view
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 it's not totally disappearing of locals market but
supermarkets
 are affecting somehow the local shops.
First
 of all,
people
 are having lack of time because of their tight schedule so they gave much preference to buy anything from
supermarkets
 rather than any local shop.
Furthermore
,
supermarkets
 lure their customers by giving a lot of
scheme
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schemes
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 like buy one ,get one or a lot more so public run behind desperately these kinds of schemes.
Moreover
,
supermarkets
 are combined
of
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 a lot of other services like cinema,food courts and playroom
consequently
this
 is a great beneficial part of any business when
people
 can not stop them to go and buy another beyond benefits. In local ,businesses
people
 have a limited stock not having varieties as
supermarkets
 are having so
that is
 another reason when
supermarkets
 are running great rather than local businesses. In conclusion, overall it can be observed that
supermarkets
 are the
first
 priority in
people
's choice but it doesn't mean that local communities are dying. It can say that they are
danger
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 but not existent.
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