Some people think that hobbies should be linked with technology, while others believes that it is not necessary for hobbies to be involved with technology. Discuss what is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and give relevant examples from your experience.

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In today's
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, it is believed by some part of the population that hobbies should be somehow related to
technologies
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while others disagree with
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opinion. I think that
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statement is incorrect and a give
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reason why a given idea is false is that all people are different and everyone's preferences differ.
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fact that not do hobbies mean something
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pleasent
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pleasant
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for a person and is considered to be a joyful pastime but
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not all humans are interested in
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.
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, if not everyone is capable to cope with
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does not mean that they are forced to do it against their desire.
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, recent research has
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that only 2% of all human beings are genuinely fond of technological development.
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, another cause why it is not essential to have a hobby linked to technology is that in
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case there will be no variety in
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world
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and no
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creativity
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there will be
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artistic humans and those who prefer different activities.
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lead to a period of stasis if
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the technological
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technological
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aspect of the
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will be developing while others will remain the same.
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, scientists claim that not only understanding of
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is valuable in a modern
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since without art and creativity nothing would be developed. Eventually, to conclude, in my
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hobbies do not
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to
be linked to
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since,
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, not everyone is eager to learn them and,
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, other spheres and disciplines are equally important for
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world
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