Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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studying online is becoming increasingly popular. Each year more and more people believe that there are more

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online rather than traditional

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will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why traditional

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study whenever they have the time to do it.

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days, a huge number of students have to work in order to afford university,

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course, most of the classes are recorded so they can arrange their time schedule so as to keep working and do not miss the grade.

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there are a lot of questions that the students ask in order to clarify

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like history or

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a video with information. in conclusion, as online

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that one kind of

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, a teacher is able to transmit his own experience and

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can lead them to learn things that are not written in every book.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

e-Learning
face-to-face education
remote learning
virtual classroom
webinar
digital platform
self-paced learning
interactive learning
course accessibility
academic networking
pedagogy
synchronous/asynchronous sessions
MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
edtech (educational technology)
holistic development
practical skills
collaborative learning
digital divide
curriculum adaptation
technological literacy

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