Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why traditional

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days, a huge number of students have to work in order to afford university,

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course, most of the classes are recorded so they can arrange their time schedule so as to keep working and do not miss the grade.

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like history or

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a video with information. in conclusion, as online

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Topic Vocabulary:

e-Learning
face-to-face education
remote learning
virtual classroom
webinar
digital platform
self-paced learning
interactive learning
course accessibility
academic networking
pedagogy
synchronous/asynchronous sessions
MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
edtech (educational technology)
holistic development
practical skills
collaborative learning
digital divide
curriculum adaptation
technological literacy

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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As a country develops, more people are able to purchase a car. Do you think that the positive for the individual outweigh the negatives for the environment?