Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As far as
i
am concerned there is always going to be bad situations in life, Change the capitalization
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nevertheless
, we can take th
action to make something to change that Correct your spelling
the
situation
in order to get something better that we deserve if we work hard for it. when people
doesnt
complain about a bad Correct your spelling
doesn't
situation
they are accepting it, and not trying to do anything, for my personal point of view i
will always be the person who Change the capitalization
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try
to improve its Change the verb form
tries
situation
as far as i
can. because its easy for some Change the capitalization
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people
stay
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to stay
on
their comfort zone, being comfortable and not try their best , and Change preposition
in
i
am totally Change the capitalization
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desagree
with Correct your spelling
disagree
that
Change the determiner
that person
those people
people
i
do Change the capitalization
I
prefer
see Add the particle
toprefer
people
which always get what they want because they try hard and they want to improve their situation
something that is
totally admirable and all of us must try to do, because at the end of the story that people
is the one who is succesful
and make whatever they want because of their hard effort, enterprising Correct your spelling
successful
people
which never gives up, so finally
i
would say that Change the capitalization
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i
prefer to be that kind of Change the capitalization
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people
who always look forward and try their best. and dont
get me wrong, of Correct your spelling
don't
course
that Add the comma(s)
,course
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people
who accept the bad situations in the way as it comes to their lives,
because that Remove the comma
apply
people
has
an advantage which is to keep calm in any bad Change the verb form
have
situation
that comes, and thats
great too! So briefly Correct your spelling
that's
thats
my perception.Correct your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite