Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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am concerned there is always going to be bad situations in life,

nevertheless

, we can take

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the

action to make something to change that

situation

in order to get something better that we deserve if we work hard for it. when

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doesn't

complain about a bad

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they are accepting it, and not trying to do anything, for my personal point of view

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will always be the person who

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to improve its

situation

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can. because its easy for some

people

stay

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their comfort zone, being comfortable and not try their best , and

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am totally

desagree

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disagree

with

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that person

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people

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do

prefer

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see

people

which always get what they want because they try hard and they want to improve their

situation

something

that is

totally admirable and all of us must try to do, because at the end of the story that

people

is the one who is

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successful

and make whatever they want because of their hard effort, enterprising

people

which never gives up, so

finally

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would say that

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prefer to be that kind of

people

who always look forward and try their best. and

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don't

get me wrong, of

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that

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respect

people

who accept the bad situations in the way as it comes to their lives

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because that

people

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an advantage which is to keep calm in any bad

situation

that comes, and

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that's

great too! So briefly

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that's

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my perception.