Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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in our life’s, it can’t be avoided and you can’t do anything about it, but you can change the way you accept the situations. In my
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the way you react depends on the situation, some things you don’t have to
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if you are in a bad job, where you don’t feel comfortable doing your work, you need to stop, or else the efficacy won’t be good. Some people suffer bullying and they think that the solution is to consent or tolerate the abuse, but the solution is to talk with someone who had the authority to stop the abuse and control the bullies, you can’t tolerate any emotional or physical abuse for anyone. Another example could be when you received an underpayment for your work and your time. You know how much you work cost and the time
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for you. When your boss is submitting you
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for and extra hours, the right process is to talk with the persons who control all
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right process and reach an agreement, if it doesn’t come up with a solution, the better option is to change your job to a fair job. But as I said before sometimes is
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to accept situations,
for example
when you lose
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, you need to accept your failure, obviously if it was fair, and admit that not always you can win. When you fail an exam is good to admit your fault but try to improve
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time, studying more and more.
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