Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, many
people
tend not to spend time
on recreational activities or taking up new hobbies
. There could be some reasons for this
issue and it seems to me that this
can lead to some negative consequences on both individuals and society.
One possible cause is that people
might want to save time
for working and other priorities. Obviously, many people
seem to focus all their efforts and time
on targets and career purposes which can bring them a future promotion and more rewards, increments or bonuses. They may think that if they spend a
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time
on
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this
will be time
-consuming, while they can spend it on earning money or doing housework instead
. Another reason for this
problem is that many individuals fail to maintain hobbies
for such
a long time
. For example
, although
everyone admits and perceives the tremendous benefit of running, few ones can continue to exercise for a long time
. Many hobbies
are taken up and people
can repeat them regularly, however
, they tend to quit or feel frustrated after some months due to losing their patience and interest.
There might be some potential
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time
for hobbies
will make people
become more passive and sedentary, which later lead to unhealthy
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lifestyle
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lifestyles
This
issue could also
transmit bad social memes among young adolescents and children, which eventually make more people
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besides
working.
In conclusion, the priority for work and inadequate patience to maintain have lessened time
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on
hobbies
. This
could lead to some potential risk for people
’s health and transmit bad habits to the whole society.Submitted by lorachan113 on
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