how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The diagram gives some data on the process of
coffee
production and preparation for selling in supermarkets and shops. Overall, there are 11 stages for production before it can be put on the markets and shops. The process commences with getting the
coffee
beans and culminates with filling up jars.
To begin
with, the
coffee
beans are mowed on the farm and being dried in the sun to remove water. After that, the beans were roasted and cooled frequently.
Then
, it entered into a grinding machine and being mixed with hot water and to became the mixture which was strained on the following step. At the
next
stage, the strained mixture was realized to become freeze the mixture as the liquid. Afterwards, it was entered into a grinder the
second
time and
this
is followed to dried in a vacuum so the water turns into. In the final stage,
this
coffee
is packed into jars.

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