Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games . What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

Recently, technology is part of daily activities to the extent that they

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so advanced to the point that most people rely on it, as it provides

variety

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of entertainment

such

as video

games

which

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enjoyed by

children

. Using

such

particular

games

have pros and cons;

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I would like to highlight two particular reasons

such

as its usefulness for learning and the

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act.

First

and foremost, developer produces copious amount of

games

for different stage of age. Some of them may benefit

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children

learning process. In which, they could make studying become

fun

and enjoyable.

For instance

, counting

games

are viewed to be one of

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the entertainment

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activities, which could help parents introduce Numbers and Calculations for their preschool kids.

Additionally

, there are

also

exciting puzzle

games

that could improve

children

cognitive skills.

Hence

,

such

entertainment would serve as a

fun

learning exercise for kids. On the other side, the addictive tendency of video

games

would become a serious problem if not managed properly. Parent involvement is substantial to oversee and manage

this

particular

activity

. Admittedly, there should be a time limit of one’s usage for

such

enjoyment as it is time-consuming and engrossing. To illustrate,

children

who are preoccupied with

such

online

activity

would have less time playing with their peers,

hence

their social skills would be lacking and they would have fewer friends.

Therefore

,

such

activity

needs to have enough portions so it would not cause harm. To conclude, certain game activities may increase

children

motivation to learn because of their

fun

nature but it

also

needs to have adult guidance to prevent excessive playing. I believe

such

entertaining

activity

is necessary for

children

to relax and learn in a

fun

way.