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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

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It is undeniable that many
people
 in modern society are often choosing to be
business
 owners, rather than to be
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an employee
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employee
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employees
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 in a
company
 in a
company
 or
organization
. From my point of view, the reasons of
people
 are being self-employed have many causes
such
 as income, independence and quantity of
work
, and being self-employed not only offer the benefits
,
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 but
also
 offer the
drawbacks
. In the following paragraph, both
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this
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from
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 everyone, many
people
 are becoming more knowledgeable, as the result, the great
people
 choose to be
business
 owners, rather than to be
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an employee
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employee
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employees
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 in a
company
. One of the important reasons
of
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 their
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 is that self-employed is
independence
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 from
system
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 of a
company
 or
organization
.
For example
, if they
work
 in a
company
, they will not spend
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time
to
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travel, compared with working on
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business
.
Additionally
, many
people
 said that working in
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 big
organization
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pressure from their chief who want to
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 good quality of
work
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good advice. Another reason is that the
employee
frequently
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 dissatisfied with their salary which is inappropriate whit
quantity
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 of their
work
, and low welfares
such
 as health care
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services
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 are often provided by their
organization
. One of the
drawbacks
 of being self-employed is that they are responsible for everything within their own
business
, but
people
 who in a
company
 must not manage
for
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everything in their
work
.
Secondly
 of the
drawbacks
 is that they have a lot of pressure
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problems
such
 as
employee
problems
, finance
problems
, customers
problems
 and others, as the result, they have a lot of stress. Another
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drawbacks
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drawback
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 of being self-employed
is
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 unstable working
time
 because every
business
 owner
have
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 to
work
 all the
time
such
 as customers from
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 call for
work
 when they go to bed, they must talk even though it was late for bed, as the result, they are in poor health, and they cannot spend a lot of
time
 with friend and family due to they have to devote all their
time
 to their
business
. In conclusion, being self-employed is
offer
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offers
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 both
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benefits and
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drawbacks
 to everyone.
Therefore
, it is recommended that
people
 who want to be
business
 owners should have the proper readiness
such
 as responsibility and knowledge for their own
business
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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