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In some countries, it is illegal for employers to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

#countries #employers #someone #job #age #development
Nowadays, there has been a passionate argument about illegitimate to dismiss prospective workers to become
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candidate
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candidates
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 for a
job
 on the basis
on
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age
. From my perspective, I believe that it has enormous advantages effects.
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To begin
 with, it is commonly believed that
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 of law protecting the right to apply for a
job
 with discrimination will create a huge gap among society, people will not get equal opportunities. For more clarification, any person has the right to learn any new skills at any
age
 and compete
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 any
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.
For instance
, old ladies tend to learn new skills
such
 as
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 and handcrafting which support their income with
such
 new talent to apply in a beauty Salon or art gallery. Jobholder who are over 50 years with expertise in
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 and implementation of market needs. Young applicants have not a wise decision as
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 one.
However
, companies are looking for applicants which can fit thein in a perfect
job
. If those companies searching for people under 40 years, they will not find
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 people in their field easily. To illustrate more, qualified
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employees
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 sure will add value and profit for their institutions. They can appoint them as consulting
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jobholders
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 to use their experience and competence irrespective
to
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age
. If they discriminate against their
age
, they may lose
prospective
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a prospective
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employee
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employees
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 who could have performed well. In conclusion, preventing discrimination between
job
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 the
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 is beneficial for companies and
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individuals
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.
This
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also
 will enhance economic and trade cooperation with other countries.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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