Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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has become an essential tool in our

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because of its tremendous pros especially for

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a negative side to it.

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, I agree with the statement that

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educational usage should be restricted. In

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of the use of

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among

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. It is true that the

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has many

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for

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. Yet, the

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due to many reasons which I will talk about .

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open access to the

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all the time tend to become more reliant on the

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of thinking of new ways to solve

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that they are having during a school project or

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homework, they immediately turn to a prepared answer

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the

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and, that could reduce the level of competition among

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which will lead to a lazy and unproductive generation.

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problem solving

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skills that will definitely need in their future career.

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is that some

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could start developing a plagiarism

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through being used to copying other people work from the

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dangerous

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on the student ethics which is an important aspect of

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process.

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among

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, it has

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plenty of

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as,

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who are leaning more towards the artistic path,using the

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can be very beneficial during their art classes because it will allow them to dive into many creative pictures and scenes which will inspire them and boost their imagination.

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, using the

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by

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could help them explore new

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and it will expand their perspective on the many things,

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as, the latest technology which could open the doors for new inventions. In conclusion, using the

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has become an essential thing in our life.

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several

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for it.

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, I agree with the statement of limiting the use of it among

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, and

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for the discussed reasons.