In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Nowadays, there are many qualified

students

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after graduation

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are

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unemployed after long-term seeking

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a job. In my

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,

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issue happens due to some reasons relating to both

graduates

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and governments and some measures should be taken to tackle

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problem as soon as possible. There might be some possible reasons that lead to the unemployment of many

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they get are highly educated.

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, all

graduduates

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graduates

tend to stay

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the city and try to get a job while there

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not

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empty vacancies.

Students

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seem to apply for some big companies for well-known employers that only recruit several

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candidates

in a year and the competition is extremely high with thousands of resumes.

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unsuccesful

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unsuccessful

successful

candidates do not want to apply for small businesses and wait for the

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opportunities.

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, the government in many countries are unable to distribute job positions suitably to some provinces and suburbs. If authorities encourage all

graduates

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to leave big

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cosmopolitans

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and work in some less crowded cities with higher incomes and bonuses, many

graduates

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will not try to keep accomodating in cities, which cause

unescessary

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unnecessary

redanduncies

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redundancies

.

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problem occurs

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due to the lack of programs in universities to guide

students

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clear purposes and targets for their future jobs which can meet employees' requirements. To address

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issue, there could be some potential solutions that have to be conducted by

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governments

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and

graduates

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. It may be more beneficial if governments improve the lectures and programs that

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to make

students

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clearly understand what they want to work in the future

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apply

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so that they can easily search for the companies and the requirements of future jobs.

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Furthermore

,

goverments

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governments

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and local authorities have to encourage

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recruitment in rural areas or small provinces that can attract more

students

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to apply. Another step could

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be effective that

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should contact employers to get internships before officially graduating, which does not only provide them sufficient skills and knowledge but

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help employers easily design more practical questions while interviewing. In conclusion, the unemployment of many highly qualified individuals occurs because of both

students

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and

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governments

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problem can be tackled by some realistic measures by designing practical programs, distributing suitable jobs to some remote areas and trying to get internships before graduation.