Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

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Nowadays, the trend of sending youngsters to boarding school is commonly popular among parents. While some parents believe that children should
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in boarding school, but others disagree with
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. Both viewpoints have merits, as
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, these strict
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are great to main self-discipline and follow
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on time. Because mentorship is provided by teachers, and they
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learn how to collaborate with others.
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, instructors allow them to follow permanent routines to
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, play and sleep on time which assist in their personal enhancement and their personality develops in a positive way by doing so. That’s why they built more cooperative nature by facing these life experiences which will improve them as a person.
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, some mothers believe that it is not a good idea because
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kids face homesickness which
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their personal growth and independence. Sometimes leaving away from family can cause mental illness and requires them to push themselves into unusual
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.
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, these education
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are far more expensive than other private
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.
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, studies have shown that teens who
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in public
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have 70% self-growth as compared to others who
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in prep
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, seminary can cause
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a feeling
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of sadness which hinders individuals own development. In conclusion, parents are immensely admitting their child into preparatory institutes.
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these places can lead to self-improvement and amplification,
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they can
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cause isolation.
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