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Many parents complain about violence promoted their children through video games, TV programs and other media. Why is it happening? What can be the solution for it?

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There is no doubt that we can see the adverse effects of broadcast sport, TV programs and other media in the current generation and thereby they are becoming arrogant. In
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 of focusing more on the studies, youth is wasting their time on unknowledgeable and unrefined video games and TV programs. Many parents allow their children to use mobile phones, due to that, video games are easily accessible for teenagers. The user interaction of these games and shows have improved and it becomes easy for them to play or watch any broadcast game or a youtube program respectively.They become habitual of using these entertainment sources, minor's are becoming stubborn when we restrict them from handling those devices. We can not even guarantee the level of content that they can observe on social media platforms. Most of the content is useless and harmful for the coming generation and it may affect their mindsets and thought processes. To solve
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, parents should not allow their kids to handle mobile phones or they can have a daily time limit of handling a mobile phone. Thereby the little one's can be discipline while operating mobile phones. We can restrict few shows, which includes harmful scenes. One example is Netflix. In Netflix, we can create profiles for younger age groups and they can not watch age restricted shows.
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