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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

#growth #shops #towns #cities
Nowadays
technology
 has taken over almost all ordinary activities whereby, for shopping, it is a click on the computer button and all your shopping will be delivered at home.
Nevertheless
,
this
 is a worrying trend to numerous
shops
 in town and cities as
the
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may be
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maybe
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 phased off.
To begin
 with,
technology
 has several merits and demerits, even though; we have no option but to adapt to the system. Various global countries
technology
 was adapted way long ago
hence
, facilitated development including in remote areas .For, example online
being
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 one of the tactics which
has
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 brought along employment to 50% of students who graduates. In, addition
this
 sort of business is cheaper since one
do
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 not have to pay rent and again,you can transact businesses wherever you are and
lastly
 reach masses of
people
 online unlike physical
shops
. For
this
 reason, there is a possibility that, in
few
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decade
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 to come, there will be very minimal physical
shops
 available since
the
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society
 is adapting to the
technology
 of online shopping.
Secondly
, despite the agitation of physical
shops
 being faced out, they can still advertise online and have
physical
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point
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 of collection for their customers.
Hence
shops
 will still remain crucial as some
customer
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customers
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 will still require to see the item or even compare with other items physically before making a decision to reimburse. In, addition due to increased cases of conning,
shops
 are still very crucial. For, example research was done by
University
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 of Nairobi shows that 40% of
people
 in
the
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society
 still do not trust online shopping. For,
this
 reason
shops
 are still very important in
the
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society
 as there
people
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are people
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 taking advantage of online shoppers to shoplift capital from them. In, conclusion
technology
 has changed the normal way of doing things including shopping which is adding value to several
people
 in
the
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society
 .
Therefore
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of
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 online shopping is growing at a speedy rate.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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