The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays

technology

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has taken over almost all ordinary activities whereby, for shopping, it is a click on the computer button and all your shopping will be delivered at home.

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this

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is a worrying trend to numerous

shops

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in town and cities as

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may be

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phased off.

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with,

technology

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has several merits and demerits, even though; we have no option but to adapt to the system. Various global countries

technology

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was adapted way long ago

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, facilitated development including in remote areas .For, example online

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one of the tactics which

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brought along employment to 50% of students who graduates. In, addition

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sort of business is cheaper since one

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not have to pay rent and again,you can transact businesses wherever you are and

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reach masses of

people

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online unlike physical

shops

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. For

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reason, there is a possibility that, in

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to come, there will be very minimal physical

shops

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available since

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society

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is adapting to the

technology

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of online shopping.

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, despite the agitation of physical

shops

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being faced out, they can still advertise online and have

physical

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a physical

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point

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of collection for their customers.

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shops

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will still remain crucial as some

customer

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customers

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will still require to see the item or even compare with other items physically before making a decision to reimburse. In, addition due to increased cases of conning,

shops

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are still very crucial. For, example research was done by

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the University

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of Nairobi shows that 40% of

people

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society

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still do not trust online shopping. For,

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reason

shops

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are still very important in

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society

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as there

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people

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taking advantage of online shoppers to shoplift capital from them. In, conclusion

technology

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has changed the normal way of doing things including shopping which is adding value to several

people

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the

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society

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interest

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online shopping is growing at a speedy rate.

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e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
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retail apocalypse
digital economy
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

In many countries, increasing numbers of people are becoming interested in learning about the history of the house or building where they live. What are the reasons for this? hOW CAN PEOPLE RESEARCH THIS?

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