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"Prevention is better than cure." Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.

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Healthy is the most cardinal part of our life, without good
health
 we may not be able to carry out our daily activities efficiently and effectively. It is for
this
 reason that individuals must take it upon themselves to prevent contracting any ailments or put up measures to reduce their effects on our bodily functions through treatment.
Firstly
 ,preventive protocols against some conditions or diseases are formulated to lessen the burden that comes with
management
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 of these
I'llnesses
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Illnesses
. By educating the general public on how the
health
 problem comes about,
it's
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 progress,the signs and symptoms and possible complications,we are increasing their knowledge base and
thus
 compliance to steps put in place against
aquiring
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acquiring
 the ailments are adhered to.
For example
 sensitisation on avoidance of getting the covid-19 virus
such
 as social distancing, frequent hand washing,not touching eyes and nose and steaming has lead
in
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 the reduction of confirmed cases. Treatment of certain genetic
illness
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has lead to
the
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 reduction in mortality rates globally.
For instance
,the number of people dying with
leukemia
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leukaemia
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 has been lowered through the discovery of stem cell transplant which is better than bone marrow transplant, an invasive procedure
to
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 both the donor and recipient.
Although
 prevention of various
health
 issues is important,it is equally vital to treat them in order to stop the progression and effect on the body which
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may be
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maybe
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may be
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 expensive to treat.It is my opinion that government must allocate
equivalent
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the equivalent
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 amount of funds to
prevention
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the prevention
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 and treatment of
health
 conditions and diseases.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • preventive measures
  • health education
  • public awareness
  • proactive approach
  • unsustainable
  • economic productivity
  • healthcare system
  • vaccinations
  • curative measures
  • comprehensive healthcare
  • financial burden
  • incidence
  • preventable diseases
  • eradicating
  • controlling
  • allocated
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