"Prevention is better than cure." Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.

Healthy is the most cardinal part of our life, without good
health
we may not be able to carry out our daily activities efficiently and effectively. It is for
this
reason that individuals must take it upon themselves to prevent contracting any ailments or put up measures to reduce their effects on our bodily functions through treatment.
Firstly
,preventive protocols against some conditions or diseases are formulated to lessen the burden that comes with
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of these
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. By educating the general public on how the
health
problem comes about,
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progress,the signs and symptoms and possible complications,we are increasing their knowledge base and
thus
compliance to steps put in place against
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the ailments are adhered to.
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sensitisation on avoidance of getting the covid-19 virus
such
as social distancing, frequent hand washing,not touching eyes and nose and steaming has lead
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the reduction of confirmed cases. Treatment of certain genetic
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has lead to
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reduction in mortality rates globally.
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,the number of people dying with
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has been lowered through the discovery of stem cell transplant which is better than bone marrow transplant, an invasive procedure
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both the donor and recipient.
Although
prevention of various
health
issues is important,it is equally vital to treat them in order to stop the progression and effect on the body which
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expensive to treat.It is my opinion that government must allocate
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amount of funds to
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and treatment of
health
conditions and diseases.
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