Traffic congestion is becoming more and more common in urban areas. What are the causes? What solutions can be adopted to solve this problem?

It is true that traffic jams have become a big problem for many major cities.

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essay will discuss the reasons behind

this

phenomenon and

then

offer feasible solutions to it. There are a

number

of factors responsible for

congestion

. Chief among these is that cities attract to a

number

of migrated

people

,

then

leading to the exploding population in many cities ,

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the infrastructures

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not insufficient and improving enough to adapt to rising the need and demands of citizens. As a consequence , the streets become overcrowded and being a bottleneck every time .Ho Chi Minh city ,

for example

, always have traffic

congestion

almost every time especially in a rush -hour ,

hence

the excessive

number

of commuters in the city .Another reason is that

people

prefer using private

vehicles

rather than public

transport

. Because it is time-saving and convenient .

Consequently

,

this

demand attributes to traffic jams. Various measures,

nevertheless

, can be adopted to tackle the situation. The

first

possible approach is that the government should invest

money

to improve public

transport

as well as infrastructure with a modern system.

This

will encourage citizens to use public

transport

instead

of their own

vehicles

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because it is low taxes and convenient. As the result , the

congestion

can decrease significantly . The

second

solution is that the authorities should impose the strict law that

people

must pay more

money

when moving by private

vehicles

in the peak-time. London ,

for example

,

people

are charged

money

for driving by their cars in the rush hour and

this

charging

money

will use for improving the

transport

system .

Therefore

, the

number

of private

vehicles

, as well as

congestion

,

congestion

will be decreased. In conclusion , these are several reasons that can be given to explain why

congestion

is a common problem for many metropolia.,

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steps can be taken to alleviate

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issues.