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government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop to the country. Do you agree or disagree?

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Today, some
people
 believe that the contribution of
science
 to society as a whole should be prioritized as an educational subject compared to other
disciplines
such
 as music, art, etc. It is true that
science
 can bring us more convenience and quality of life, but I still disagree with
this
 statement and I believe that
people
 should not ignore the equal importance of other subjects.
Science
 education involving physics, mathematics and chemistry can be seen as the foundation or bridge to a direct link to the economy and technology. Cutting-edge products and inventions in developing countries often need
such
 technologies to support them. Because
this
 knowledge can meet their practical needs, more and more students and employees are willing to choose
such
disciplines
.
However
, in the long run, the
development
 of a country cannot depend on
science
 alone, as other
disciplines
also
 bring multiple economic benefits and a broader perspective. Art or literature can
also
 bring great profit and
development
 as well as endless imagination to mankind,
thus
 stimulating the economy and leading to great innovation.
Science
 and other
disciplines
 should be equally important to the nation as a whole. The absence of both can
also
 hinder the
development
 of individuals, which
then
 affects
further
 processes.
People
 who are the
first
 productive force should have the right to choose the subjects that interest them, rather than being driven by money.
People
also
 need to be emotionally enriched by learning the arts and enjoying music, which can give them a positive attitude when they encounter difficulties and can
also
 inspire them to embrace work or study. By stopping at just
science
 learning, those who are imaginative and emotionally sensitive will be curtailed to the detriment of their efficiency and productivity. In conclusion,
although
science
 education has an irreplaceable place in the
development
 of the country, one should not underestimate the equal role of other sciences.
This
 is why,
therefore
, I disagree with these recommendations.
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