Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

The growing number of private cars has caused several traffic and pollution problems to the society. I would

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that there are more effective ways to deal with

this

issue rather than a rise in the

price

of

petrol

. There are some reasons why simply lift the

price

of

petrol

might no be the way to tackle

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all kinds of problems brought

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excessive use of

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vehicle

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of all, even after the charge for gasoline goes up, I believe there are still a majority of people who are willing and able to pay for the

petrol

.

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those who cannot afford

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may have trivial effects.

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policy may

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impact on public transportation.The fee for taking the buses will definitely rise as the

price

of

petrol

increased.

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people are willing to take greener transport,as an unwanted result. There are more viable solutions to tackle those matters than rising the

price

of

pertol

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petrol

.

Firstly

,more sustainable fuels should be replaced

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traditional ones.

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,electric buses are supposed to be introduced in the megacities since they are less energy consumed and less noise produced.

Moreover

,governments should encourage individuals and companies to purchase

electic

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electric

motorcar by reducing taxes and providing subsidies.

Lastly

, public transportation is supposed to

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expanded in order to accommodate more commuters.The charges for public transportation should be reduced

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level that every

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can afford ,with aim of motivating more residents

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common transport. In conclusion,I disagree that increasing the fee of gasoline is the best approach to cope with the traffic and pollution problems.And there are several more productive methods to deal with those matters.