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As most people spend a maior Dart of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job saisuction for all workers?

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After graduating from school, most
people
 devolve a major part of their life
into
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work
.
Therefore
, having a high level of
job
satisfactory
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satisfaction
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 has
important
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an important
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 influence on
people’s
 well beings. I believe that an ordinary workload, an amicable
work
 atmosphere and a reasonable salary could lead to
job
 satisfaction. There are three aspects which will improve
people’s
job
satisfactory
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satisfaction
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.
Firstly
,
people
 who working a long time and having an excessive workload tend to feel depressed and frustrating.
Hence
 a regular working
hour
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hours
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 and workload will lead to
a
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relatively high
job
 satisfaction of employees.
Secondly
, If the salaries of workers are not live up
their
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 expectations, they will have a sense of feeling that their hard-working did not be rewarding and appreciated，which will definitely result in
a
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low
job
 satisfaction. So
paycheck
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the paycheck
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 of
people
 should be adequate to provide
themselves
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for themselves
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 and their family and give them a sense of achievement.
In addition
, a friendly and amicable
work
 atmosphere which means that employees and employers could get along could
also
 boost
people’s
 wellbeing and
satisfactory
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satisfaction
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 in the workplace. It is true that not everyone will enjoy their
jobs
. In the
increasing
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increasingly
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 competitive
job
 market and the era of economic downturn, it is impossible that everyone could
practice
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practise
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 the profession that they
interested
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are interested
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 in.
For instance
,
people
 who pursuing
jobs
 in
financial
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the financial
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 field are less likely to enjoy their
work
, as these certain
jobs
are tend
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tend
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 to be more repetitive and tedious . In conclusion, adults spend most of their time and energy in the workplace.
Therefore
,
job
satisfactory
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satisfaction
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 plays an essential part in
people’s
 lives. There are several factors
contribute
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that contribute
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 to
this
.
However
, it is unrealistic to have the expectation that everyone could love their
work
 since different
jobs
 have different requirements.
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