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People believe that these days there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this? How to improve this?

#people #behaviour #lack #respect
In
this
 modern era,
internet
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the internet
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 plays a crucial role in our everyday life. Because of
overpowering
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the overpowering
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 advantages of
internet
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the internet
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,
people
 have become less social than before.
Also
,
number
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a number
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 of
people
 disrespecting others has
shoot
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 up.
This
 essay will discuss
reasons
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the reasons
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 behind
this
 trend and possible ways to change
this
 situation in a positive manner.
To begin
 with, advancements in
the
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technology came with both, advantages, as well as disadvantages. Various mobile games, social media sites and other entertainment applications are definitely one of the unbeatable inventions of the century but increased use of these has resulted
into
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people
 becoming more and more isolated. Nowadays, they have the option to interact and meet new
people
 online depending upon their convenience.
As a result
 of these, they don't socialise with others on
personal
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 basis. Other than that, the young generation
have
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 become more
indipendent
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independent
 because of multiple platforms
availability
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 to earn money at
early
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an early
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 age and they get themselves involved in some activities that are harmful
for
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 them.
However
, they do not find it beneficial when any elderly
people
advice
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 them about what is right and what is not simply because of the exposure
young
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the young
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 generation is getting. Every cause comes with
solution
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a solution
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. To avoid
people
 becoming anti-social, we should spread awareness about public gatherings on
the
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social media, schools and colleges. Other than that, the individual's activity on mobile or laptop should
also
 be regulated by
a
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software that updates them about excess usage of mobile.
For example
, OnePlus mobiles
comes
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 with a feature that shows a pop-up of taking a break for some physical activities upon using mobile for more than 3 hours consistently. Apart from
this
, a curriculum should be designed for students which includes respect toward other life, which includes not only
human
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humans
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 but
also
 other living creatures. If we inculcate
this
 habit in children from
young
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a young
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 age,
then
 it will create a better future for
upcoming
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the upcoming
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 generation. In conclusion, society can overcome
of
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increased anti-social behaviour as well disrespectful nature of
people
 by
above mentioned
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 initiatives.
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