People believe that these days there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this? How to improve this?

In
this
modern era,
internet
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plays a crucial role in our everyday life. Because of
overpowering
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advantages of
internet
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,
people
have become less social than before.
Also
,
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of
people
disrespecting others has
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up.
This
essay will discuss
reasons
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behind
this
trend and possible ways to change
this
situation in a positive manner.
To begin
with, advancements in
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technology came with both, advantages, as well as disadvantages. Various mobile games, social media sites and other entertainment applications are definitely one of the unbeatable inventions of the century but increased use of these has resulted
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people
becoming more and more isolated. Nowadays, they have the option to interact and meet new
people
online depending upon their convenience.
As a result
of these, they don't socialise with others on
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basis. Other than that, the young generation
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become more
indipendent
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independent
because of multiple platforms
availability
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to earn money at
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age and they get themselves involved in some activities that are harmful
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them.
However
, they do not find it beneficial when any elderly
people
advice
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them about what is right and what is not simply because of the exposure
young
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generation is getting. Every cause comes with
solution
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a solution
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. To avoid
people
becoming anti-social, we should spread awareness about public gatherings on
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social media, schools and colleges. Other than that, the individual's activity on mobile or laptop should
also
be regulated by
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software that updates them about excess usage of mobile.
For example
, OnePlus mobiles
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with a feature that shows a pop-up of taking a break for some physical activities upon using mobile for more than 3 hours consistently. Apart from
this
, a curriculum should be designed for students which includes respect toward other life, which includes not only
human
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humans
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but
also
other living creatures. If we inculcate
this
habit in children from
young
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a young
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age,
then
it will create a better future for
upcoming
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the upcoming
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generation. In conclusion, society can overcome
of
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increased anti-social behaviour as well disrespectful nature of
people
by
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initiatives.
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