Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Other, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

From the past few decades, there has been a huge increase in the
number
of
jobs
.
Now a days
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, each and every citizen irrespective of
the
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gender has the right to work and live his life independently.
Some
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notable
number
of people believe that
the
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men and
women
have different abilities that
makes
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make
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them suitable for particular types of
jobs
only.
In contrast
, remaining believe that
both
are suitable for any kind of
job
. With the
fast growing
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IT sector in the countries, it opens a wide range of
job
opportunities.
Both
men and
women
, who have the required skills for the
job
can apply for that. There is no specific rule that any company will state, only distinct gender can apply.
For example
, when there is a
job
vacancy for
“Programmer
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analyst” in any software organization, anyone who thinks that they are proficient in that field can apply for that
job
and can go through the recruitment process. No Human Resource manager will reject you on the basis of gender. In
this
democratic world,
both
men and
women
are considered equal and all the firms are strictly abided not to violate
the
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equality.
Although
there are many strong arguments in favour of allowing
both
genders to work in all places, some minor situations are to be considered in certain workplaces. Some
jobs
require high physical work, which
women
are incapable of.
In addition
to that, there are some
jobs
which
involves
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cause
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the cause
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of health problems
especially
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,especially
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to the
women
.
For example
,
a
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women
a woman
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women
cannot pull
of
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large wheels in
the
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factories that
requires
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require
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greater physical strength and
also
some workplaces releases some harmful gases, which can cause certain problems that are related to the
women
. To sum up, the firms have started to encourage
the
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women
, by recruiting more
number of
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women
.
For example
, one of the recognized
enterprise
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enterprises
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in India namely the “Capgemini” has opened more than 3 lakh
jobs
and stated that they will recruit more
number of
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women
in order to encourage them to come out and lead their life independent. It is the employee who has to decide, which
job
is best suitable for them by considering some of the minor factors.
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