According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average 'holiday' is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want exitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities. Do you agree or disagree?
The nature of
holidays
are
changing tremendously over the years. These days, Change the verb form
is
people
are more inclined towards trying new and challenging activities
. I am in favor
Change the spelling
favour
for
trying new Change preposition
of
activities
on holidays
but on certain
limit. It is rightly said that amount of fertilizers decide the growth of any tree, the same way, anything Correct article usage
a certain
done
in moderation is more acceptable and safe.
There has been Add the auxiliary verb
is done
Add an article
an increase
increase
in unusual Change the verb form
increasing
increased
activities
done by the tourists such
as paragliding, parasailing, snorkling
, Correct your spelling
snorkelling
squba
-diving, bungee jumping, and many other Correct your spelling
scuba
squab
tasks
. The rates of these activities
are very high, though people
prefer experiencing it
. These days, Correct pronoun usage
them
people
have tendency
to do something different and upload Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
on
social media Correct pronoun usage
it on
immediatedly
. Correct your spelling
immediately
People
have become more active during holidays
than in their normal routine. It is observed that people
feel more enthusiast
and energetic after doing Replace the word
enthusiastic
such
activities
. This
eventually brings positivity among individuals. The change experienced by people
by doing these activities
lead to change
in their mood. They usually have a tendency to think in Correct article usage
a change
such
a manner that creating memories by exploring different tasks
and collecting them will give them motivation
to pass their normal routine life. Change the article
the motivation
Therefore
, these days scenario of holidays
are
changing.
Change the verb form
is
However
, there are other school
of participants too who think that it is not very safe to do challenging Change the wording
another school
other schools
activities
. They prefer to be safe and relax during their holidays
. They Correct your spelling
believe
belive
not to take Correct your spelling
believe
risk
Fix the agreement mistake
risks
of
their life to do these Change preposition
in
tasks
. Instead
, they favour enjoying nature and explore different
Add an article
a different
culture
. Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
Moreover
, these activities
cost
are high and not everybody can afford to do so. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Therefore
, there are
Change the verb form
is
mixture
of Add an article
a mixture
people
who are in favor
of doing challenging Change the spelling
favour
activities
. To conclude, I am more inclined towards doing these tasks
but in moderation.Submitted by kajavadarapiyush786 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite