People doing dangerous sport activities like scuba driving and bungee jumping should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?

Dear Mr and Mrs Greaane Thanks for accepting my request in regard to my being settled at your house for my language training course. I have booked a flight for the 15th of September. Spending 16 hours in the air for only one flight, I will be there the day after on the 16th around 6 P.M. It is going to be a long journey coming from Iran to Canada.
Therefore
, I have to change three planes to get there. I am a 25-year-old musician. It has both positive and negative sides, which means I play my instrument, piano, a lot. If you are a music lover,
this
would be a relief for all of us.
Otherwise
, I have to arrange a way for my daily practice schedule not to bother you. I have heard that the Italian family’s cuisine is mesmerizing. Since you are Italian, I was wondering that should I presume that I can have the benefit of tasting Italian food? Not to mention that I can consider myself a good appetite person.
Consequently
, no worries just asked for my curiosity. Can’t wait to meet you all Yours sincerely M.A
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • responsibility
  • dangerous sports
  • scuba diving
  • bungee jumping
  • rescue workers
  • risk
  • save lives
  • priority
  • regulations
  • guidelines
  • safety
  • education
  • training
  • participants
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