Your friend is planning to go on a business trip to a city you know well. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter – tell him/her about some attractions to go sightseeing – recommend a restaurant to eat – give some advice on transportation

Dear Harsh, Hope you are doing
good
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. I am writing
this
letter to give you some
advise
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advice
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about the trip you are planning on
corporate
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a corporate
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visit
at
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to
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Ahmedabad. You may visit, whenever you get the chance. I have been living here for
last
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12 years. Ahmedabad has various places to visit. It has rich historical places. if knowing old traditions are cup of tea, you may go
Gandhi
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to Gandhi
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Ashram, Juma Mashid, Sarkhej Roja, and Teen
darvaja
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Darvaja
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. The beauty of these amazing places
are
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is
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visible in the early
moning
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morning
only
where
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when
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there are no crowds and you can understand them in
the
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depth. Photography is the best place during Heritage
walk
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which covers old houses called Polo. You may
look
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see
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how different people stayed in the older
time
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. Ahmedabad has
variety
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a variety
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of foods and it is famous for it. There are many multi-cuisine restaurants.
Honest
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restaurant is popular here where you may get all foods
such
as Chinese, Mexican, South
indian
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Indian
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, and Punjabi. If you just like
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specific dish South Indian, Southern is the right place. Regarding
the
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transportation, AMTS buses are
little
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tough to catch
due to
low frequencies. BRTS buses are good options where you can purchase one
full day
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ticket and travel
in
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on
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any bus. you may
also
travel in OLA or UBER private car
,
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if you just want to travel in private. Hope you have a safe trip. Please reach out to me for any assistance.
Your Sincerely
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Yours sincerely
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, Rishabh
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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