It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

(It is true that .)

While

Linking Words

some people tend towards the viewpoint that , I would have to support the idea that . On the one hand, there are clear arguments that . One of the main reasons can be that .

This

Linking Words

means that . Another reason can be that .

For example

Linking Words

On the other hand

Linking Words

, I agree with the viewpoint that .

Firstly

Linking Words

, I believe that .

This

Linking Words

is because (

For example

Linking Words

,) .

Secondly

Linking Words

, I

also

Linking Words

feel that In conclusion, it seems to me that

Syfer Wed Aug 04 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

88 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
some people think that children should not watch telvision as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Telly is considered a mode of information where you can watch anything whether it is a news medium or a music avenue. Some people believe grown-ups should not watch telly as it is not sensible for their character while others say it is beneficial for their upcoming life. In this passage, I am going to discuss both viewpoints explain my opinion in the following paragraph and come up with a logical conclusion.
5
band
Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
One half of society believe that people should compete with each other in different aspects of life such as at work, at school and in everyday life. When another half prefer cooperating together than struggling with each other. Each side has advantages and disadvantages, however in my opinion competing is better than cooperating with others.
5.5
band
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are competing views on whether to make changes in life. Although change always involves risks, I still think that it is always good to make changes because, in the long run, people will gain more from the changes they made than they lase.
6.5
band
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years,online shopping has gained significant popularity,with many individuals choosing to explore online websites to buy their things.While this trend offers several advantages,such as being easily accessed and offering more options, it also has drawbacks,including getting scammed and less interactive.This essay will examine both the benefits and disadvantages of this growing trend.
7
band
In many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. What are causes? And what will be effects on society?
Nowadays the courses related to science are not attractive for many students to choose. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this issue and then describe the possible impacts of the problem.

It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or disagree?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

some people think that children should not watch telvision as it has negative effects while some people believe that they should watch television as it helps them in their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. What are causes? And what will be effects on society?