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The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities to work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?

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Over the few decades, many
people
 migrate from rural to urban areas,
this
 can affect farming as well as
an
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 industrial side.
This
 essay will explain, some serious issues and solutions for the problems. The biggest problem with the migration of
people
 from
an
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apply
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agricultural
backgrounds
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background
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 to cities to work is, farming ideas and
process
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processes
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 will never improve,
people
 will have difficult competition and hardly get
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a job
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job
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jobs
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 in future.
For example
, if
agriculture
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the agriculture
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 field
face
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faces
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 difficulties due to the lack of farmers with labours,
with
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apply
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farming instruments and some technical ideas, no one
there
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is there
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 for help in
this
 situation. Because
,
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only
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the only
an only
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 professional
farmer
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farmers
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 can solve
this
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these
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 issues.
Moreover
, from
industrial
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the industrial
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 side, the company will have many employees, but many graduated
people
 will find trouble to get a job owing to have more competition in the same field.
Solution
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The solution
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of
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to
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this
 problem is, farmers have to make improvements in the agricultural field and they should use modern technology.
Additionally
, migration is not
a
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an
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 easy way to find financial improvement. Agricultural
counsilor
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counsellor
 will help to improve the farming style and make
profit
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a profit
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,
however
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,however
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 it should
be provide
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be provided
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 by the government for one to two years, once farmer satisfied of the profit and he will
undersand
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understand
 how he did farming, it will definitely
helps
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help
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 towards rural improvement. In conclusion,
people
 should try to make improvements
in
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on
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 their side, they should not think about migration it will impact on
world
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the world
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 economy in a bad way.
Also
, the government should concentrate on farmers difficulties or problems and try to solve them.
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