Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences.To what extent do you agree.

It

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is

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if

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is

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often argued that there must be heavier

fine

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fines

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and

penalty

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penalties

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for those who breach the

traffic

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rules. I am strongly in

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of supporting the idea. it is seen that some of the

drivers

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use bus special lines to avoid the

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,

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, car horn has a huge impact on the people's hearing organ.

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and foremost, the current punishment for offensive

drivers

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is not enough.

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, there must

a

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change in the current law enforcement. there are

drivers

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who use public

transport specific

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lanes to overcome the

traffic

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and get to the destination faster which lead to

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other

drivers

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and

also

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the nations who use

bus

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to travel.

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, according to the

lastes

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latest

Bloomberg Road news, 60% of the

drivers

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who follow other vehicle's lanes had been getting the fine notice for the

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time due to the fact that the amount of penalty is very affordable.

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, during

a

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traffic

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on the

road

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there

are

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a wheelsman

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wheelsman

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wheelman

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who keep

preesing

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pressing

the horn button and make so

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unnecessery

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unnecessary

noises

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noise

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.

rise

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in noise pollution is the result of the mentioned misconduct.

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, research in Japan

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shown

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that 70% of citizens who

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Receiving Nerve Disability (RND) are living in the city

center

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which is connected to four big highways and

12

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hours

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traffic

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of traffic

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a day. In conclusion, I absolutely agree with the opinion of increasing the

penalities

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penalties

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for those who do not obey the rules of

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. disobey the guides often lead to have a bad influence on their peers and

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put the people's physical health at risk.