You are due to move into a rented apartment next week but you will not be able to due to an unexpected problem. Write a letter to the property manager. In your letter 1) Explain the situation 2) Describe your problems 3) Tell him/her when you think you can move in Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Williams

#move #apartment #week #property #manager #situation #ms #williams

Dear

Ms.

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Williams, Hope you are doing well.

This

is with regret I would like to inform you that I won't be able to move to the apartment

week as we discussed a month ago. Unfortunately, due to an unexpected business

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journey

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travel

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I will be travelling to Malaysia to attend a client meeting

this

Friday.

However

, the duration of my stay is still under discussion but the travel is confirmed. Honestly, I want to keep

this

apartment at bay as I love the place and would not like to let it go. The concern is that I cannot pay the security and the rent in advance in cash as discussed with you by

week since my salary will be credited after the weekend. As of now, I have

buffered

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a few days and would like to confirm

you

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that I can move to the apartment two weeks from now starting from 4th September 2021. Look forward to your acceptance on

this

. Yours

sincerly

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sincerely

, Rachel Green

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

167 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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