Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

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of money.

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public service. I don't agree with

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ways to do public service some of

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doesn't require monetary value.

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individuals. In conclusion, Performing

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is not a waste of money it can help us in many ways. I believe

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should support it.