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increasing the price of petrol is the best way to control growing traffic and pollution problem. what extent do you agree with the statement? what are the measures that might be taken?

#price #petrol #control #traffic #pollution #measures
Hope the email finds you well, and I appreciate you would have a chance to give me some advice on my revised research proposal,
also
, I’d like to invite you and Jonny to have a coffee or meal to meet up
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, ( my flight was cancelled,
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 I’m continuing to be stuck in London). Jonny is available
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 9-20th August, hope we could find some
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 in with your schedule, or I don’t mind separate ones if it is hard to find the proper
time
 for both. I’m quite excited that the coming research under your supervision will start soon.
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 is that I have received an offer on 4th August,
however
, it is
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 study from January 2021 ( which is earlier
this
 year) , it is different
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 what I applied
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 study from
this
 September as you knew. I suppose it probably is a system error. I have sent an email to ask admissions and copied
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Furthermore
,
this
 is a conditional offer. But I’m a resident in the UK , who is not a
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international
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an international
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apply
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 a study visa. My understanding is that I don’t
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 provide all the requirements related to visa application,
such
 as evidence of English language competence i.e IELTS and etc., which I don’t have
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 the moment. I have asked questions to admissions as well, hope it wouldn’t impact the
time
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 you could help me to check with admissions too, to give a push to clarify my situation and
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 me a
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 one starting from
this
 September. Many thanks. Please let me know your availability
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 the following weeks, and wish you have a good weekend.
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