Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people have believed that asking the candidate
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their personal information like their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single are
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factor
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for the employer to know during
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while many people have believed that these are unnecessary. The following statements are the point of my views of why should I agree or disagree
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have read related to human resources, asking applicants
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their personal information will help define their kind of personality and the employer can get some idea of their other capabilities, strengths and talents.
For instance
, knowing their hobbies for sports like basketball, volleyball, badminton and others will contribute
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company's sporting events.
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, knowing their interests like dancing, singing and others are
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for intercompany contests.
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, identifying them whether single
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married is
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factor because sometimes there are jobs that only be suited for single or sometimes vice versa.
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interview
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. As long as they meet the requirements and qualifications of the
job
like education attainment, professional license and other
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related to
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are good to land in the
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still a lot
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employer
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employers
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who consider knowing
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and interests of the candidate so that they will know their other skills and talents.
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higher educational attainment and related training without having
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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