Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

Well, as far as my opinion related to the
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tourism
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it's
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necessory
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necessary
for any country whose economy
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on the
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tourism
, cause it can
impact
a massive
impact
on
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. But,unfortunately in some
areas
peoples use
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tourism
places like
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trash or their own regular street where they used to take advantage of their citizenship to
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create
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a mess around them, like some of them explain
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opinion regarding the trash producing activities that if they don't do so,
then
how it will be possible for those persons who used to generates their amount by
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picking up
those trash items. But
on the other hand
, local people of the
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tourism
areas
mostly complaining about
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those types of
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tourist
tourists
who cause a negative
impact
on their
areas
.
Last
year I went to the
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areas
of
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for the winter trip, and it was one of the arduous
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of my life. The hosting people were charging very high for the
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accommodation
over there
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because
if they ask less amount for the rent so it will be easy for any kind of person to stay over their places. So, the reason for their asking rate too high was that they want to give
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their
them
the
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accommodation
areas
to well behave and
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persons so they won't create a mess around it, which cause a very big
impact
on our budget. but we have no
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other
option unless we have to go for
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. But, what
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think that the reason was very satisfied no one wants to pollute their living area
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because
of what so ever reasons
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unless they equally pay
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their
taxes as compared to their high asking fairs
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which
impact
a
postive
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positive
boost in the economy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • local inhabitants
  • economy
  • boosts
  • cultural exchange
  • preservation
  • restoration
  • environmental degradation
  • overcrowding
  • strain
  • infrastructure
  • cultural dilution
  • commercialized
  • economic dependence
  • sustainable tourism
  • mitigate
  • adverse effects
  • regulation
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